这在很大程度上是可行的。我对编程非常陌生,所以请注意。
import java.util.*;
public class HangManP5
{
private static Scanner k;
public static void main(String[] args)
{
int attempts = 10;
int wordLength;
boolean solved;
k = new Scanner(System.in);
System.out.println("Hey, what's your name?");
String name = k.nextLine();
System.out.println(name+ ", hey! This is a hangman game! (Some answers have two words, usually the longer ones\n");
String word = getRandomWord();
int len = word.length();
char[] temp = new char[len];
for(int i = 0; i < temp.length; i++)
{
temp[i] = '*';
}
System.out.print("\n");
System.out.print("Word to date: "+len+" letters.");
while (attempts <= 10 && attempts > 0)
{
System.out.println("\nAttempts left: " + attempts);
System.out.print("Enter letter: ");
String test = k.next();
if(test.length() != 1)
{
System.out.println("Please enter 1 character");
continue;
}
char testChar = test.charAt(0);
int foundPos = -2;
int foundCount = 0;
while((foundPos = word.indexOf(testChar, foundPos + 1)) != -1)
{
temp[foundPos] = testChar;
foundCount++;
len--;
}
if(foundCount == 0)
{
System.out.println("Sorry, didn't find any matches for " + test);
}
else
{
System.out.println("Found " + foundCount + " matches for " + test);
}
for(int i = 0; i < temp.length; i++)
{
System.out.print(temp[i]);
}
System.out.println();
if(len == 0)
{
break; //Solved!
}
attempts--;
}
if(len == 0)
{
System.out.println("\n---------------------------");
System.out.println("You did iiiiiiit!");
}
else
{
System.out.println("\n---------------------------");
System.out.println("Better luck next time, you didn't get the word!");
System.out.println("It was \"" + word + "\"");
}
}
public static String getRandomWord()
{
switch(new Random().nextInt(5))
{
case 1:
return "peace";
case 2:
return "nuts";
case 3:
return "dankmemes";
case 4:
return "fizz";
case 5:
return "awesome";
default:
throw new IllegalStateException("Something went wrong!");
}
}
}发布于 2015-01-12 06:49:42
对于初学者来说,这个程序还不错。您将getRandomWord()例程拆分为它自己的函数,这很好。但是,您应该做得更多,因为您的main()太长了,一眼就看不出来。
getRandomWord()函数有一个严重的错误,这是因为您误用了Random.nextInt(int n)Random.nextInt(int n)。该调用的可能输出为0、1、2、3、4。因此,它永远不会选择"awesome",并且可能抛出一个IllegalStateException。不过,我不建议为此使用switch语句,因为词汇表应该被视为数据,而不是代码。最好从字符串数组中选择一个随机元素。
您还有一个逻辑错误,它允许用户一次又一次地猜测同一个正确的字母,从而“获胜”。例如,如果这个单词是"fizz",并且用户猜测'z',那么您就会记录下还有两个空白。如果用户再次猜测“z”,则报告一次胜利。(你确实应该更好地处理重复的猜测,但至少你应该防止这种错误的胜利。)
main()函数顶部的变量声明块是不友好的--没有人喜欢阅读这些声明。相反,请在尽可能接近使用点的地方声明变量。实际上,在声明块中有两个未使用的变量wordLength和solved,您自己已经忘记了这两个变量。
选择有意义的变量名称--不仅对你,而且对任何可能出现的程序员都是如此。而不是k (“键盘”的缩写),选择input (并立即初始化)。而不是temp (这不是临时的,所以它的意思必须是“模板”?),试试wordDisplay。
这主要是因为
main()代码重构为函数import java.util.*;
public class HangMan {
private static final String[] VOCABULARY = new String[] {
"peace", "nuts", "dankmemes", "fizz", "awesome"
};
private static Scanner input = new Scanner(System.in);
private static void intro() {
System.out.println("Hey, what's your name?");
String name = input.nextLine();
System.out.println(name+ ", hey! This is a hangman game! (Some answers have two words, usually the longer ones)\n");
}
/**
* Picks a word at random from the vocabulary.
*/
public static String getRandomWord() {
return VOCABULARY[new Random().nextInt(VOCABULARY.length)];
}
/**
* Makes an array of placeholder characters the same length as the word.
*/
private static char[] initWordDisplay(String word) {
char[] wordDisplay = new char[word.length()];
Arrays.fill(wordDisplay, '*');
return wordDisplay;
}
/**
* Prompts the user to enter a single-character guess (repeatedly
* if necessary in case of errors).
*/
private static char promptGuess() {
do {
System.out.print("Enter letter: ");
String s = input.next();
if (s.length() == 1) {
return s.charAt(0);
}
System.out.println("Please enter 1 character");
} while (true);
}
/**
* Fills <code>wordDisplay</code> with the guess, returning the
* number of blanks correctly filled as a result.
*/
private static int fillGuess(String word, char[] wordDisplay, char guess) {
int foundCount = 0;
for (int pos = 0; (pos = word.indexOf(guess, pos)) != -1; pos++) {
if (wordDisplay[pos] != guess) { // Prevent repeat guess
wordDisplay[pos] = guess;
foundCount++;
}
}
return foundCount;
}
public static void main(String[] args) {
intro();
String word = getRandomWord();
char[] wordDisplay = initWordDisplay(word);
int blanksLeft = wordDisplay.length;
System.out.print("\nWord to date: " + blanksLeft + " letters.");
for (int attemptsLeft = 10; blanksLeft > 0 && attemptsLeft > 0; attemptsLeft--) {
System.out.println("\nAttempts left: " + attemptsLeft);
char guess = promptGuess();
int foundCount = fillGuess(word, wordDisplay, guess);
blanksLeft -= foundCount;
if (foundCount == 0) {
System.out.println("Sorry, didn't find any matches for " + guess);
} else {
System.out.println("Found " + foundCount + " matches for " + guess);
}
System.out.println(new String(wordDisplay));
}
if (blanksLeft == 0) {
System.out.println("\n---------------------------");
System.out.println("You did iiiiiiit!");
} else {
System.out.println("\n---------------------------");
System.out.println("Better luck next time, you didn't get the word!");
System.out.println("It was \"" + word + "\"");
}
}
}https://codereview.stackexchange.com/questions/77284
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