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银行账户余额计划
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Code Review用户
提问于 2019-09-23 05:31:42
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Would我的代码被认为是相当优化和有效的?如果没有,我在哪里可以改进代码?程序运行得很好。

如果包含银行帐户数目的字典增加了?,则Would此方法的扩展性很好。

<#>设计:我在main()中只设计和保存了一个对象。即bank_1,包含一个有关多个银行帐户的信息字典。我选择只在需要时在open_bank_account()check_bank_blanance()中创建对象D3D4,这些对象在函数完成后就消失了。

意图:这里的目的是在main()中使用尽可能少的对象。

输出:程序运行良好;只需输入1,然后输入2,然后输入777,然后是777。它将打印帐户id 777的1.00美元的银行帐户余额。

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class Bank_Account:
    def __init__(self, account_id, account_pin, account_balance):
        self._account_id = account_id
        self._account_pin = account_pin
        self._account_balance = account_balance
        self._individual_bank_account_dicitionary = {}
        self._individual_bank_account_dicitionary[account_id] = {"Pin": account_pin, "Balance": account_balance}

    def get_bank_account_balance(self, account_id):
        return "Balance: ${:.2f}".format(self._individual_bank_account_dicitionary[account_id]["Balance"])

    def __str__(self):
        return "{}".format(self._individual_bank_account_dicitionary)

class Bank:
    def __init__(self, bank_name):
        self._bank_name = bank_name
        self._bank_dicitionary = {}

    def update_bank_dictionary(self, bank_account):
        self._bank_dicitionary[bank_account._account_id] = {"Pin": bank_account._account_pin, "Balance": bank_account._account_balance}

    # 1. A method to return the dictionary of bank accounts of the object from class Bank.
    # 2. In this case, only bank_1 from main() is the object argument.      
    def get_bank_dictionary(self):
        return self._bank_dicitionary

    # 1. Method to create object bank_account only when needed.
    def get_bank_account(self, account_id):
        account_pin = self._bank_dicitionary[account_id]["Pin"]
        account_balance = self._bank_dicitionary[account_id]["Balance"]
        bank_account = Bank_Account(account_id, account_pin, account_balance)
        return bank_account

    # 1. This is used to convert the dictionary into a string for printing purposes.
    def string_bank_dictionary(self):
        string_list = ["account ID: {} \naccount Pin: {} \nBank Balance: {} \n".format(key, self._bank_dicitionary[key]["Pin"], self._bank_dicitionary[key]["Balance"])\
                      for key, value in self._bank_dicitionary.items()]
        return "\n".join(string_list) 

    def __str__(self):
        return "{}".format(self.string_bank_dictionary())

def open_bank_account(bank):
#     # Uncomment out when running actual program.
#     account_id = input("Enter account id here: ")
#     account_pin = input("Enter account pin here: ")
#     account_balance = input("Enter account initial balance here: ")

    # Comment out when running actual program. 
    # Currently in used for testing purposes.
    account_id = 455
    account_pin = 123
    account_balance = 888
    bank_account = Bank_Account(account_id, account_pin, account_balance)
    bank.update_bank_dictionary(bank_account)

    # Comment out when running actual program.
    # Currently in used for testing purposes.
    account_id = 777
    account_pin = 777
    account_balance = 1
    bank_account = Bank_Account(account_id, account_pin, account_balance)
    bank.update_bank_dictionary(bank_account)

    # Comment out when running actual program. 
    # Currently in used for testing purposes.   
    account_id = 631
    account_pin = 222
    account_balance = 50
    bank_account = Bank_Account(account_id, account_pin, account_balance)
    bank.update_bank_dictionary(bank_account)

    return bank

def check_bank_blanance(bank):
    valid_id_password = False
    temporary_dictionary = bank.get_bank_dictionary()
    while True:
        account_id = int(input("Enter account id here: "))
        account_pin = int(input("Enter account pin here: "))
        for key in temporary_dictionary.keys():
            if account_id == key and temporary_dictionary[account_id]["Pin"] == account_pin:
                valid_id_password = True
                bank_account = bank.get_bank_account(account_id)
                print(bank_account.get_bank_account_balance(account_id))
                break
        if valid_id_password == True:
            break
        else:
            print("Invalid account id/password. Please try again.")

def main():
    bank_1 = Bank("ABC Bank")
    while True:
        print("Menu \n1. Open bank account \n2. Check balance")
        while True:
            account_choice = int(input("Enter option here: "))
            if account_choice <= 0 and account_choice >= 7:
                account_choice = int(input("Enter option here: "))
            else:
                break        
        if account_choice == 6:
            break
        elif account_choice == 1:
            bank_1 = open_bank_account(bank_1)
        elif account_choice == 2:
            balance = check_bank_blanance(bank_1)

main()
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回答 1

Code Review用户

发布于 2019-09-23 16:08:45

如果包含银行账户数量的字典增加,这种方法会扩展得很好吗?

是的,我认为字典访问速度快,O(1)或“恒定时间”。

台风

check_bank_blanance应该是check_bank_balance,或者更可能是check_balance

_individual_bank_account_dicitionary应该是_individual_bank_account_dictionary。那就是说-为什么这家伙根本不存在?据我所见,它只包含应该是类成员的属性。

方法名为

只需调用get_bank_account_balance get_balance --或者,如果您将其称为@property,只需balance即可。

str

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return "{}".format(self._individual_bank_account_dicitionary)

应该只是

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return str(self._individual_bank_account_dictionary)

类名

Bank_Account应该被命名为BankAccount

数据暴露

方法get_bank_dictionary可能不应该存在。您正在公开应该由类本身处理的数据。此代码:

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    for key in temporary_dictionary.keys():
        if account_id == key and temporary_dictionary[account_id]["Pin"] == account_pin:

应该存在于Bank类中,可能作为get_account()存在。另外,不要在dict中循环查找键--只需使用[]进行丁查找即可。

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